Thread:Translating talk:Okawix/About Okawix:Okawix-site-download.confirmation mail/en/reply (3)

Hey McDutchie, I'd say you're right, some line breaks are missing. And maybe a few minor other details too. I would correct Okawix:Okawix-site-download.confirmation mail/en this way: Dear Okawix user, You have just created an account on the download service of http://www.okawix.com/. You will soon be able to download free offline contents: Wikipedia, article selections by authors, backups of your on-line bookmarks, and many other features. To connect to the service from Okawix, you'll have to enter your e-mail address together with the following password you chose: %s. Before that, please click on the link below to confirm that you really are the person who asked for the creation. Still now, some sentences still sound a bit strange to my ears. Could someone improve the text? As for okawix-site-download.lost_mail, I would correct it this way: Cher utilisateur d'Okawix, Quelqu'un, probablement vous, nous a signalé que vous aviez perdu votre mot de passe. Si c'est bien le cas, cliquez sur l'adresse ci-dessous ; elle vous connectera directement à votre compte, et vous pourrez ensuite modifier votre mot de passe dans les paramètres. Don't know why, but I don't have the right to edit the corresponding pages... Could someone check this? Thanks again, take care :-) Matthieu.