unclear word order

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Das Bearbeiten von Feldern ist denjenigen erlaubt, die sie erstellt haben, sowie Kuratoren.

sounds good to me.

"Sowie" is smoother here indeed. This is, because it more likely implies a little Pause before it, than "und".

Whether or not a formulation with "dürfen" or "erlauben" is preferable, depends on style, and what other related messages use (which I do not know).

Thanks. Also I am happily learning from these discussions. :-)

Purodha Blissenbach (talk)17:29, 12 August 2015

Yes, your suggestion of "dürfen" spares a partizip and a nominalisation :-)

 Felder bearbeiten dürfen nur diejenigen, die sie erstellt haben, sowie Kuratoren.

And so shoooooort ! I added a the translation of "only". As far as i understood we found a good solution. So i make the change. Feel free to change if i am not right.

Lib2know (talk)20:43, 12 August 2015