About [[Okawix:Okawix-site-download.confirmation mail/en]]
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Hey McDutchie,
I'd say you're right, some line breaks are missing. And maybe a few minor other details too. I would correct Okawix:Okawix-site-download.confirmation mail/en this way:
Dear Okawix user,<br/> You have just created an account on the download service of http://www.okawix.com/.<br/> You will soon be able to download free offline contents: Wikipedia, article selections by authors, backups of your on-line bookmarks, and many other features. To connect to the service from Okawix, you'll have to enter your e-mail address together with the following password you chose: %s.<br/> <br/> Before that, please click on the link below to confirm that you really are the person who asked for the creation.<br/>
Still now, some sentences still sound a bit strange to my ears. Could someone improve the text?
As for okawix-site-download.lost_mail, I would correct it this way:
Cher utilisateur d'Okawix,<br/> Quelqu'un, probablement vous, nous a signalé que vous aviez perdu votre mot de passe. Si c'est bien le cas, cliquez sur l'adresse ci-dessous ; elle vous connectera directement à votre compte, et vous pourrez ensuite modifier votre mot de passe dans les paramètres.<br/>
Don't know why, but I don't have the right to edit the corresponding pages... Could someone check this?
Thanks again, take care :-) Matthieu.